Issues:
- Fix the bars 46-50 - chords in left hand
- Fix the bar 53 - the chord on the first beat (previous edition mistake)
- Fix the bars 61-62 - fingering in left hand (previous edition mistake)
- Fix the passages in 72-76. Solution: don't rush before, in bar 70 there is a ritenuto, in 72 a tempo, but not more. Accelerando is in the second half of bar 74, so don't play faster before. Learn the line of the upper notes in passage better with left hand.
- Fix the whole section which begins in bar 80, shape a phrase, relearn a notes (previous edition mistake)
- Fix the left hand in bars 106-107
- Fix the left hand in bar 119, just count it properly while playing. Also fix the passage in right hand - practice upper notes more.
- Fix bars 122-124 - just don't crush and don't rush.
- Fix bar 144 - there is no chords in left hand (previous edition mistake)
- Fix the start of the passage in bar 162 and 167
- Fix the lack of pulse in left hand in bars 173-174
- Figure out why I can't play the polyrhythm in 175 when playing the whole piece
- Fix the passages section starting in bar 191, there can't be any slip
- Fix chords in bar 196 and 198-201. Solution: don't rush passages before and take it easy - I think it's the mental thing. If I rush before there is nothing I can to to build a stretto
- Fix the chords in right hand in bar 219 (previous edition mistake)
- Fix the section starting from 227 in right hand - better articulation
Details:
- Do a ritenuto in bar 6, shape the melody more from the beginning
- Less bass in the not-a-"waltz" section, shape the chords
- More legato in octave section which begins in bar 38
- Add proper dynamics to bars 53-56, more time for tenuto
- Section which begins in bar 58 - more singing in melody, melody more like a phrase, less left hand, show some nuances of the second voice
- Ritenuto in bar 70
- Shape melody more in 102-103 and 106-107
- More majesty in bar 125
- In theme starting from bar 129 more calm in left hand, adjust the tempo to the beginning of the piece
- Leggiero section starting from 112 should be lighter, show trill more, let the sixths fly.
- Bars 137, 141, 144 - the repeated notes should mean something
- Motives in section beginning in bar 152 should correspond more with each other
- Shape more the culmination and the final, think more about the pedal
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